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cand pui nextu?
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hallo -_-`
You make me wanna la la
In the kitchen on the floor
I'll be a french maid
When i meet you at the door
I'm like an alley cat
Drink the milk up,I want more
You make me wanna
You make me wanna scream
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Deci prin simplul fapt ca cereti next nu ma incalzeste cu nimic..asta nu-mi demonstreaza ca cititi
In al2lea rand, daca va place si vreti next macar spuneti de ce vreti next si nu ma luati cu "ce marfa e "
Comentati si voi actiunea
In al2lea rand postul acela gigant cu "next' pur si simplu e de n-ar mai fi..asta e primul meu fic, stiu ca nu-i reusit..si nici nu cer cine stie ce, dar macar comentati putin actiunea din partea postat:|
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T:off,tu esti mereu intelegator..ca deobicei..
B:Lasa..si tu ai calitatile tale.
T:haide sa mergem jos ca asa ne'a zis tata.
Amandoi au iesit din camera si sau dus la tatal lor intr-o camera mai retrasa.Fara sa stie ca Anna asculta cea ce ei vorbeau.
M:sunt foarte bucuros sa va revad.
B:Tata si eu mi'a fost atat de dor de voi.
T:si mie..eram atat de aproape de Bill.
M:acum va rog sa ascultati ce vreau sa zic,stiu ca e straniu..sau poate nu,stiu ca vati intalnit acum ce vreiti sa vobiti,dar trebuie sa vorbim ceva foarte serios.
B&T:Sigur tata. spunanad amaandoi pe un ton plin de seriozitate.
M eci,Tom tu te vei casatori cu Anna[in momentaul acela Bill inghitise in sec] si tu Bill cu Elizabeth printesa frantei.
T:Bill ai patit ceva?Esti cam palid.
B:nu..cred ca e de la oboseala,aseara nu am putut dormi.
M:ar trebui dupa cina sa te duci sa te odihnesti si pregatirile de nunta dupa nunta lui Tom cu Anna.
B:Asa voi face.Buna ziua!
Bill dadu sa deschida usa si Anna se retrage speriata inapoi.
T:Bill stai merg si eu.
Anna fugi repede in casa scarilor si se facu ca nu auzi nimic,coborand linistita catre cina.
T:Hei,Anna stai si cu noi!
A:Sti cu nu'i politicos sa strigi asa pe scarile palatului.
T:relaxeazate..nu'i nimic oricum nu e nici un invitata special la masa in seara asta asa ca..
A:Asa ca poti sa zbieri si.Anna nu mai reusi sa zica nimic ca Tom se uraca pe balustrada si aluneca pe ea pana jos.
T:Ce zici acum nu incalc procedura?
Anna isi dadu ochii peste cap.
A:Tu ce crezi?De ce faci asta,sa se enerveze tatal vostru?
B:Tom,Anna are dreptate.Daca te'ar fi vazut tata sigur ai fi fost pedepsit,cel putin nu te'ar fi lasat sa parasesti palatul o saptamana.
T:Mai termina! Sunteti prea incordati..daca nu puteti face fata,mergeti cu valul.
A:deja am ajuns la tarm..ce val..
B:Haide sa coboram si noi.Spuse Bill pe un ton putin perceput.
A:Avem alta oportunitate?
Bill ridica din umeri ca si cum nu ar fi stiut.
~La masa~
M:si Tom ti'a palcut in germania?
T:Sigur..a fost minunat,mai ales ca Anna a fost acolo.
M(zambind):iar tu Bill?
B:a fost destul de frumos..
H:Anna,am auzit ca iti place sa calaresti,asai?
A:Nu imi place,ador...
H:Si eu calaream cand eram mai tanara,dar dupa cazatura de la 17 ani...am renuntat.
A:Imi pare rau.
H:Sa nu iti para..[Helen fusese intrerupta de Mark]
M:Cred ca ar fi timpul sa va duceti in camerele voastre...
Fiecare se ridica de la masa.Helen si Mark ramasese inca la masa sorbind fiecare dintr-un pahar cu vin.In timp ce baieti si Anna urcau agale scarile palatului.
B:Noapte buna tuturor!!
A&T:Noapte buna!!
Anna intra in camera sa lumina era stinsa si era o atmosfera intunecata si rece.Inchise usa sprijinindu-se cu spatele de ea alunecand usor catre podea.Sunetul picaturilor de ploaie care se loveau de geam ii atrageau atenita incat o facu sa se ridice apropiindu-se de marginea rece a patului,privind trista catre geamul ud.
Usa se crapa si lumina patrunse usor in camera,Anna nu se intoarese ramase nemiscata privind spre geam.Prin crapatura usi isi facu loc o persoana,care se apropia de ea cu repeziciune.O prinse de mijloc si isi aporopiie trupul de'al fetei.Anna nu reactiona.Necunoscutul incepu so sarute pe gat plimbandu-si mainile pe sani si abdomenul ei si tot odata desfacandu-i sirete corsetului.Anna strangea cu putere bara de la marginea patului.
Anna era cu bustul gol,dar nu mult dupa asta realiza ce se intampla isi ridica rapid corsetul,se intoarce cu fata catre necunoscut si ii da o palma.
X:AAUU!!!Anna ce e cu tine?Peste doua saptamani vom fi sot si sotie.
A(oftand):Tom..tu erai..
Tar cine crezi..vrun vampir..sau vreo sluga?
A:A..nu!!nu desigur..dar m'am speriat!
T(rugator):Hai sa continuam..
A:Nu,Tom.Nu e bine..mai astepta 2 saptamani..si dupa vom vedea..
Tar..
A:nici un dar!!Sti ca in dimineata nunti...trebuie sa verifice..cineva..daca..stiu..si eu..
T:Poti vorbi o propozitie coerenta?
Aa...de ce?
T:Pai da spune odata ce vroiaia sa zici..ce ateatea intreruperi.
A:Bine...uite in dimineata,dupa noaptea nuntii,trebuie ca cineva sa verifice cerasaful pe care am dormit..Intelegi?
T:Aa..si ce era atat de greu sa spui.
A:Mai bine..pleci!!
T:Bine atunci.Noapte Buna,regina mea!Sarutandu-i mana.
A:Noapte buna..!
Tom se duse in camera si adomi rapid..Anna statea privea tavanul,Bill el statea la fereastra..fara sa doarma.
Zilele trecu rapid si acum era seara de dinainte nuntii.Era estul te tarziu..dar Anna se foia de colo colo prin camera.
"Ce ma fac?.eu nu il vreau..daca spun nu ce o sa se intample?.."Isi tot repeta Anna in gand.Pana cand era destul de tarziu destul de obosita incat adormii.
~Dimineata~
In camera era o totala agitatie.Tota lumea se plimba de colo colo cautand fiecare cate ceva.Anna se trezii si buimaca vedea cam in ceta.
A:Ce cauta toata lumea la mine in camera?
X:Alteta vostra..ne scuzati dar printul Tom ne'a trimis ca sa va pregatim..
Aa?..bine atunci..da'tii drumul.
Toata lumea tragea din cate o parte a corpului ei..uni de par,alti de fata,alti ii asezau rochiia.Pana la ora 2 Anna fu gata.Tom la fel,care o astepta zambitor la altar.
Anna era condusa de catre tatal ei la altar in timp ce ea privea prin sala cautandu'l pe Bill.Ajunsa la altar privirea i se indrepta catre Tom.Dupa o jumatate de ora de slujba preotul ajunse la..
P(preot): Kaulitz Tom o iei de sotie pe Hohenzollern Anna de buna voie si nesilit de nimeni mereu alaturi la bine si la rau?
In biserica liniste,toate priivirile erau atintete asupra lui Tom
Ta!!
P:Hohenzollern Anna il iei de sot pe Kaulitz Tom de buna voie si nesilita de nimeni,mereu alaturi la bine si la rau?
Anna cand auzi "de buna voie si nesilita de nimeni"mai avea putin si ii dadeau lacrimile.Linistea puse stapanire pe multimea de oameni si in biserica,Anna privea speriata in spate se uita dupa Bill care statea linistit pe o banca langa Mark,Helen si Elizabeth.Anna se uita catre tatal ei ..........
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Nimeni nu stie.Cum te simti.Nimeni nu e acolo.Care sa te inteleaga.Ziua a fost intunecata.Si singuratica.Scrii "Ajutor".Cu sangele tau.Chiar daca de fiecare data doare.Viata ta e fara niciun sens.Umbra ta apasa greu.Si tot ceea ce ai nevoie acum.Nu ai...
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kaulitzanamaria a scris:
Deci prin simplul fapt ca cereti next nu ma incalzeste cu nimic..asta nu-mi demonstreaza ca cititi
In al2lea rand, daca va place si vreti next macar spuneti de ce vreti next si nu ma luati cu "ce marfa e "
Comentati si voi actiunea
In al2lea rand postul acela gigant cu "next' pur si simplu e de n-ar mai fi..asta e primul meu fic, stiu ca nu-i reusit..si nici nu cer cine stie ce, dar macar comentati putin actiunea din partea postat:|
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T:off,tu esti mereu intelegator..ca deobicei..
B:Lasa..si tu ai calitatile tale.
T:haide sa mergem jos ca asa ne'a zis tata.
Amandoi au iesit din camera si sau dus la tatal lor intr-o camera mai retrasa.Fara sa stie ca Anna asculta cea ce ei vorbeau.
M:sunt foarte bucuros sa va revad.
B:Tata si eu mi'a fost atat de dor de voi.
T:si mie..eram atat de aproape de Bill.
M:acum va rog sa ascultati ce vreau sa zic,stiu ca e straniu..sau poate nu,stiu ca vati intalnit acum ce vreiti sa vobiti,dar trebuie sa vorbim ceva foarte serios.
B&T:Sigur tata. spunanad amaandoi pe un ton plin de seriozitate.
Meci,Tom tu te vei casatori cu Anna[in momentaul acela Bill inghitise in sec] si tu Bill cu Elizabeth printesa frantei.
T:Bill ai patit ceva?Esti cam palid.
B:nu..cred ca e de la oboseala,aseara nu am putut dormi.
M:ar trebui dupa cina sa te duci sa te odihnesti si pregatirile de nunta dupa nunta lui Tom cu Anna.
B:Asa voi face.Buna ziua!
Bill dadu sa deschida usa si Anna se retrage speriata inapoi.
T:Bill stai merg si eu.
Anna fugi repede in casa scarilor si se facu ca nu auzi nimic,coborand linistita catre cina.
T:Hei,Anna stai si cu noi!
A:Sti cu nu'i politicos sa strigi asa pe scarile palatului.
T:relaxeazate..nu'i nimic oricum nu e nici un invitata special la masa in seara asta asa ca..
A:Asa ca poti sa zbieri si.Anna nu mai reusi sa zica nimic ca Tom se uraca pe balustrada si aluneca pe ea pana jos.
T:Ce zici acum nu incalc procedura?
Anna isi dadu ochii peste cap.
A:Tu ce crezi?De ce faci asta,sa se enerveze tatal vostru?
B:Tom,Anna are dreptate.Daca te'ar fi vazut tata sigur ai fi fost pedepsit,cel putin nu te'ar fi lasat sa parasesti palatul o saptamana.
T:Mai termina! Sunteti prea incordati..daca nu puteti face fata,mergeti cu valul.
A:deja am ajuns la tarm..ce val..
B:Haide sa coboram si noi.Spuse Bill pe un ton putin perceput.
A:Avem alta oportunitate?
Bill ridica din umeri ca si cum nu ar fi stiut.
~La masa~
M:si Tom ti'a palcut in germania?
T:Sigur..a fost minunat,mai ales ca Anna a fost acolo.
M(zambind):iar tu Bill?
B:a fost destul de frumos..
H:Anna,am auzit ca iti place sa calaresti,asai?
A:Nu imi place,ador...
H:Si eu calaream cand eram mai tanara,dar dupa cazatura de la 17 ani...am renuntat.
A:Imi pare rau.
H:Sa nu iti para..[Helen fusese intrerupta de Mark]
M:Cred ca ar fi timpul sa va duceti in camerele voastre...
Fiecare se ridica de la masa.Helen si Mark ramasese inca la masa sorbind fiecare dintr-un pahar cu vin.In timp ce baieti si Anna urcau agale scarile palatului.
B:Noapte buna tuturor!!
A&T:Noapte buna!!
Anna intra in camera sa lumina era stinsa si era o atmosfera intunecata si rece.Inchise usa sprijinindu-se cu spatele de ea alunecand usor catre podea.Sunetul picaturilor de ploaie care se loveau de geam ii atrageau atenita incat o facu sa se ridice apropiindu-se de marginea rece a patului,privind trista catre geamul ud.
Usa se crapa si lumina patrunse usor in camera,Anna nu se intoarese ramase nemiscata privind spre geam.Prin crapatura usi isi facu loc o persoana,care se apropia de ea cu repeziciune.O prinse de mijloc si isi aporopiie trupul de'al fetei.Anna nu reactiona.Necunoscutul incepu so sarute pe gat plimbandu-si mainile pe sani si abdomenul ei si tot odata desfacandu-i sirete corsetului.Anna strangea cu putere bara de la marginea patului.
Anna era cu bustul gol,dar nu mult dupa asta realiza ce se intampla isi ridica rapid corsetul,se intoarce cu fata catre necunoscut si ii da o palma.
X:AAUU!!!Anna ce e cu tine?Peste doua saptamani vom fi sot si sotie.
A(oftand):Tom..tu erai..
Tar cine crezi..vrun vampir..sau vreo sluga?
A:A..nu!!nu desigur..dar m'am speriat!
T(rugator):Hai sa continuam..
A:Nu,Tom.Nu e bine..mai astepta 2 saptamani..si dupa vom vedea..
Tar..
A:nici un dar!!Sti ca in dimineata nunti...trebuie sa verifice..cineva..daca..stiu..si eu..
T:Poti vorbi o propozitie coerenta?
Aa...de ce?
T:Pai da spune odata ce vroiaia sa zici..ce ateatea intreruperi.
A:Bine...uite in dimineata,dupa noaptea nuntii,trebuie ca cineva sa verifice cerasaful pe care am dormit..Intelegi?
T:Aa..si ce era atat de greu sa spui.
A:Mai bine..pleci!!
T:Bine atunci.Noapte Buna,regina mea!Sarutandu-i mana.
A:Noapte buna..!
Tom se duse in camera si adomi rapid..Anna statea privea tavanul,Bill el statea la fereastra..fara sa doarma.
Zilele trecu rapid si acum era seara de dinainte nuntii.Era estul te tarziu..dar Anna se foia de colo colo prin camera.
"Ce ma fac?.eu nu il vreau..daca spun nu ce o sa se intample?.."Isi tot repeta Anna in gand.Pana cand era destul de tarziu destul de obosita incat adormii.
~Dimineata~
In camera era o totala agitatie.Tota lumea se plimba de colo colo cautand fiecare cate ceva.Anna se trezii si buimaca vedea cam in ceta.
A:Ce cauta toata lumea la mine in camera?
X:Alteta vostra..ne scuzati dar printul Tom ne'a trimis ca sa va pregatim..
Aa?..bine atunci..da'tii drumul.
Toata lumea tragea din cate o parte a corpului ei..uni de par,alti de fata,alti ii asezau rochiia.Pana la ora 2 Anna fu gata.Tom la fel,care o astepta zambitor la altar.
Anna era condusa de catre tatal ei la altar in timp ce ea privea prin sala cautandu'l pe Bill.Ajunsa la altar privirea i se indrepta catre Tom.Dupa o jumatate de ora de slujba preotul ajunse la..
P(preot): Kaulitz Tom o iei de sotie pe Hohenzollern Anna de buna voie si nesilit de nimeni mereu alaturi la bine si la rau?
In biserica liniste,toate priivirile erau atintete asupra lui Tom
Ta!!
P:Hohenzollern Anna il iei de sot pe Kaulitz Tom de buna voie si nesilita de nimeni,mereu alaturi la bine si la rau?
Anna cand auzi "de buna voie si nesilita de nimeni"mai avea putin si ii dadeau lacrimile.Linistea puse stapanire pe multimea de oameni si in biserica,Anna privea speriata in spate se uita dupa Bill care statea linistit pe o ba
nca langa Mark,Helen si Elizabeth.Anna se uita catre tatal ei .......... |
In al2lea rand postul acela gigant cu "next' pur si simplu e de n-ar mai fi..asta e primul meu fic, stiu ca nu-i reusit..si nici nu cer cine stie ce, dar macar comentati putin actiunea din partea postat:|
in primul rand exista lenea
in al doilea rand e misto ficul
in al3 rand NEXT
mai repede
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rad_silvia, fară să fiu rea, ai înteles mesajul fetei? Sau o faci intenţionat? Mă rog...
Te susţin în chestia cu "nextul" şi eu detest...
Mă bucur mult că ai decis să-l continui, bine faci! Ideea e reuşită, povestea originală, frumoasă, bine legată. Îmi place, şi cu siguranţă în timp o să avansezi şi mai mult.
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haide cu nextul aici! 
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 Eisblumen.°Mega-VIP Immer Zusammen°๋Din: Buenos Aires
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DACA MAI CITESC NUMAI NEEEEXXXXXXXTTTTTT
STEG POSTUL !!!
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Nu cere respect daca nu daruiesti
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Fii original , nu copia ceea ce nu ai creat
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